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Burning Desire
Written By Excelsior
 
This feeling of love that I have inside
Is burning strong like an eternal flame
Behind the face of happiness it hides
And I have only myself to blame.

What started out as a simple friendship
Has now led to be so much more
The simple and rare words that we once spoke
Are so much stronger than before

I only wish that I could tell him now
But do I ever dare to risk such shame
Maybe I'll bury it; hold it in deep,
I don't know if I could deal with such pain

Maybe I will risk it, then I would know
If we could be, my feelings I must show
So to temptation I must plead;
Allow myself to be free!


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Added: Nov 6th 2002   Hits: 2506

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Posted by Vancouver on ( 2005-10-28 18:46:59 )
I like your poem! The "hesitation" part kind of slows down the flow (at the second half of it) but it lands ok :)

Good job!

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Posted by Lizaj on ( 2005-05-02 18:31:28 )
Nice

Posted by DrLove on ( 2005-01-08 01:35:16 )
It was written for me.
I know I know. Nice work

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Posted by Goddesshaitienne on ( 2004-10-09 16:08:06 )
A lot of people can relate to your poem. It's well written

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Posted by Philosophenoir on ( 2004-06-24 12:49:34 )
I enjoy reading you...you write very well!

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Posted by NegNago on ( 2004-06-17 22:45:51 )
Verry nice poem I'll give you a 10 point

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Posted by Venus on ( 2004-02-28 19:39:19 )
thats nice excell very well said.

Posted by SherSher on ( 2003-07-08 14:57:25 )
Nice poem. I like it very much!

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Posted by Theblackknight on ( 2002-11-06 19:49:32 )
I knew it had to me for me. guess I am the lucky one.

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Posted by Tigason on ( 2002-11-06 16:02:01 )
If the feelings are true then it is a very nice poem. I wish those sentiments were toward me. Ooh!!!!
Whoever this guy is, he is a very, very fortunate man.

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Posted by Theblackknight on ( 2002-11-06 13:16:53 )
Is this one for me? I would like to know.


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