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Death Inside Me
Written By Goddesshaitienne

Laughter and confidence on my exterior
Darkness creeping up the corners of my heart
Twitching and churning swallowing feelings
Tears won't fall for pride cause
Weakness surmount when looking in the mirror

The loneliness in my interior
Superior to my laughter and confidence
Aching and plucking pulling true feelings
Tears won't fall for pride cause
Sorrow beggining to be visible on my exterior

It seems that I can't open up to express
I shut down whenever there's access
Is it my pride or do I like Misery?
Because everyone seems to think I'm happy but me
I want someone to know, but alas no success

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Inspiration:ummh don't know

Added: Jan 24th 2005

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All Poems By Goddesshaitienne ::.

• Sangwin Ke Vou Zet! • Death Inside Me • Ki Yes Mwen Ye? • Vanity, Vanity, Vanity • Chéri Vinn Doucement • Sweet Penetration • Ou La La'm Joi • Quoi de plus? • It's me you see... • Home of my heart, Haiti • My heart goes Wow • Ching Ching Ching • The will of self protection • Ti kè •

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Posted by Vancouver on ( 2005-10-28 19:10:39 )
It that all? That poem is not finished. It opens too many doors and leaves reader wondering whats behind them. Its a very deep topic and you need to expand on the above. Now, get back to writing! :)

Posted by Makendal30 on ( 2005-03-20 06:06:06 )
if you don't know what or who inspired this poem, than it's safe to assume that the poem is just general and not personal...and that makes it even better than it already is. Nice scribe sister.

Posted by DrLove on ( 2005-01-28 00:04:41 )
Most writers express their personal feelings. I don't know if that's how you write, but I sense a very unhealthy marriage in your house. Keep writing!

Posted by Sam on ( 2005-01-26 13:27:07 )
Bravo, This one got my attention.

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